Honors English 11/12
Rosemary Dibben
(707) 965-6759, PrepEnglish@yahoo.com
English Dept.
PUC Preparatory School
McKibbin Hall, 1 Angwin Ave.
Angwin, CA 94508

Syllabus | Fourth Quarter's AssignmentsRevised: Oct. 22, 2009
Week of August 24 to 28 (Beginning of first quarter and first semester)
MonFirst day of class: Class introductions. Distribute copies of course syllabus. Discuss who should take Honors English 11/12 and why. Journal Writing #1:
  1. What was the BEST part of your summer?
  2. Brag on yourself about something you've done in the last 12 months of which you are very proud.
  3. What I need to accomplish this school year . . .
  4. This year will be the same . . .
  5. This year will be different . . .

Reading survey (on board). Finish reading course syllabus. Decide on partners for writing bulletin re-make as review of the stages in the writing process. No hmwk. [SA Handshake and POP Back-to-School supper tonight!]

TuesFinish reading surveys. Research components for writing process bulletin board. Look for options, ideas, processes, etc. that make each step in the process come alive and seem real. Turn in sketch of your section of the bulletin board by the end of class.
Hmwk: Continue researching components for writing process bulletin board. Be ready to start assembling bulletin board in class tomorrow.
WedContinue working on writing process bulletin board. Do rough layout for design. No hmwk.
Leave notebooks in classroom for initial check. (For full credit, you need to have a notebook, five tabs--correctly labelled and in right order, a syllabus in "Handouts" section, Writing #1 in the "Journal" section, and your name on the front cover and/or spine.)
ThursFinish (?) bulletin board. Check out Reading List for guidelines. Working together, begin making book choices for this year.
Hmwk: Refine your book list started in class. Generate list of 10 books (5 British, 5 American) to propose to class tomorrow. Have reasons for your choices.
FriFinish bulletin board. Review book options with copies of possibilities in class. Refine the lists that you began last night for homework. Research, browse, discuss, read. . . . Figure out what YOU want to read in class this year. We'll pull things together next week. No hmwk.
Week of August 31 to Sept. 4
MonDiscuss book choices. Come up with a list of 10 books (5 British, 5 American) that will be this year's course of study.
Hmwk: Finalize your list before class tomorrow.
TuesFinish book selection. Click here to see the Proposal for this year.
Hmwk: Research notes on Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. (One page of handwritten notes, in your own words. Document all sources with complete URLs)
WedDue: Research notes. Begin Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Read Part One.
Hmwk: Check out this 1869 edition of the Middle English original text from Project Gutenberg. There's an introduction included that you may want to browse in--if you're interested. However, be sure to scroll down to the text of the poem so that you can see what the text from the original manuscript looks like. Notice the unusual letters, words that are similar to Modern English, and words that are very different than Modern English. You may even want to compare sections of text to your copy of the Modern English translation.
ThursSir Gawain and the Green Knight. Reading quiz (Part One). Begin viewing "Mother Tongue," The Story of English.
Hmwk: Read Part Two.
FriSir Gawain and the Green Knight. Reading quiz? Finish viewing "Mother Tongue," The Story of English. No hmwk.
Week of September 7 to 11
MonNo school: Labor Day.
TuesSir Gawain and the Green Knight. View King Arthur: The Legend & the Land, Pt. 1 & 2
Hmwk: Read Part Three. [View The History of English Literature: Old & Middle English?]
Wed[Publication Workshop] Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Reading quiz (Part Three) Distribute Reading Questions (This is a resource to help with reading the poem for details. The page numbers don't work for our edition, but the line numbers should be fine.). Discuss vivid visual imagery of the poem. Discuss examples. Read Part Four. Reading should be complete before class on Friday.
Hmwk: Finish reading before Friday's class. Work on an illustration of your visual imagery scene--to be included in the classroom collection of Sir Gawain essays.
Thurs[Publication Workshop] Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Distribute essay questions and class discussion of essay options. Finish reading and/or work on visual imagery illustration.
Hmwk: Finish reading before class tomorrow.
FriSir Gawain and the Green Knight. Due: Finish reading before class. Reading quiz. [Journal Writing (Which character would you change place with? The green girdle: significance? How does it change? What about the wife: pawn? complicit?)] Work on illustration. Have it complete by Monday. No hmwk (unless you have not finished your illustration).
Week of September 14 to 18
Mon[ITED/CogAt Testing] Due: Sir Gawain illustration. Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Work on essay questions. Discuss and make selection. Thinking stage of the writing process. Journal Writing #2 (Sir Gawain essay thinking/pre-writing). New piece of paper: write down line numbers in the poem that support any/all ideas you had in your journal writing. Look for EVIDENCE in the poem.
Hmwk: Think, think, think! Write down the thinking stage of the writing process for this essay. Next time we have class, I'll check this off for credit. Go for several pages of thoughts, answers, notes, research, diagrams, lists, sketches, quotes, twiddles, poetry, free writing, etc. Don't say "No" to ANY idea that might be useful. Go for quantity. (We'll work on quality later). Think: more thoughts and more pages of evidence of thought = more points!
Tues[ITED/CogAt Testing] No class.
Hmwk: Continue with thinking stage of the writing process for your essay. (See Hmwk for yesterday.)
Wed[ITED/CogAt Testing] Due: Lots of evidence of the thinking stage of the writing process. Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Check off thinking stage evidence for credit. Organizing stage of the writing process. Concept mapping. Cluster sheets. Outlines. Scissors method. The early part of the organizing stage can be very messy! This is the beginning of the "Just say, No" part of the writing process. But, don't say "No" to too much at this point. You can vote stuff off the island later on, too. Keep EVERYTHING that looks like it addresses your essay question.
Hmwk: Organize, organize, organize. Create a controlling thesis statement. Be prepared to have the organizing process completed by the end of class on Thurs.
ThursDue: thesis statement for your essay. Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Essay questions. Organize, organize, organize. Do NOT throw anything away until AFTER you have submitted your final draft. (You get permission to hoard!)
Hmwk: Bring the process and the result of your organizing to our next class meeting to be checked off for credit.
Fri A [Paradise Volleyball Tournament] Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. Essay questions. Due by end of class: organizing stage of your essay. Include line numbers and/or quotes, examples, illustrations, etc. Be READY to draft by end of class. Begin drafting. No hmwk. [Prep Church and Prep Football this weekend]
Week of September 21 to 25
Mon Essay questions. Check off organizing stage for volleyball ladies. Discuss drafting stage of the writing process. Draft!
Hmwk: Have rough-rough draft completed. (A "rough-rough" draft may not have an introduction--other than a thesis statement, and it may not have a conclusion. But the body paragraphs should be all there.)
Tues

Essay questions. Check off rough-rough drafts. Assess your first draft:

  • Print out your rough-rough draft. (Football people: I'll initial this tomorrow.)
  • Underline the thesis statement (the sentence that tells the reader what your essay is about). This should be the last sentence of the introductory paragraph--eventually.
  • Underline the topic sentence of EACH paragraph. (The topic sentence is the sentence that tells the reader what the paragraph is about.)
  • Does each topic sentence support a part of the thesis? (Each topic sentence SHOULD support a part of your thesis statement.) Need to make changes?
  • Underline the concluding sentence of EACH paragraph. (This is the sentence that draws the paragraph to a close, recaps it, and can include a transition to the next paragraph.) Need to add them?
  • Read your essay to make sure you are avoiding excessive summarizing. Use only enough to get your points across.

  • Now, save your rough-rough draft with a NEW file name, and begin your next draft.
    • Double space this next draft. Use Times, New Roman, 12 pt. font, 1" margins all around, your name, class, assignment in upper-right corner (standard academic font).
    • Add items that your assessment showed were missing in your rough-rough draft.
    • Revise sections that were revealed as weak in your assessment above.
  • Continue working on your essay to make it stronger/better. Intro? Conclusion? Examples?
  • Print out a NEW draft to bring to class tomorrow. (This should be a DIFFERENT draft than the rough-rough draft that I initialled in class today.)

Hmwk: Complete a rough draft. (Your whole essay should now be present in draft form.) Print out a copy of this second draft to bring to class tomorrow. This is a DIFFERENT draft than the draft I initialled in class today. (Football people will have TWO drafts to show me: the rough-rough draft AND the new, second draft.)

Wed

Essay questions. Check off second drafts that incorporate all of the changes suggested by yesterday's in-class essay self-assessment. Peer reviewing:

  1. Read your partner's essay straight through, carefully, and without commenting..
  2. Now discuss. Does the essay address the question?
  3. Does the essay break the subject into parts and discuss these parts? Does the essay just summarize the poem--rather than discuss the parts of the subject?
  4. What about the opening? Talk about info that needs to be in the intro.
  5. Is there a clear thesis statement? Does it predict what will be in the essay? Is there anything in the body that is not predicted by the thesis?
  6. Look at each individual body paragraph:
    1. Is there a clear topic sentence?
    2. Does the paragraph develop that topic?
    3. Is there a concluding sentence?
  7. What about the ending? Does the essay draw to a close satisfactorily? Does it end by concluding the subject that was introduced? Does it conclude a different topic?
Thurs[Leadership Conference] Essay questions. Discuss introductions and conclusions. Continue with revision and peer review--as useful to you. I'll continue reading rough drafts--as students are ready for this. No hmwk. ("Introductions & Conclusions" hndt from Princeton Writing Program)
Fri B No class.
Week of September 28 to Oct. 2
MonProofreading tactics. Work on essays. I'll continue reading drafts--as students are ready for this.
Hmwk: Complete another draft of Sir Gawain essay--incorporating proofreading changes.
TuesDiscuss Sir Gawain and Biblical parallels. Four levels of meaning. Journal writing #3 (Examine the Biblical passages and references on the board and consider deeper levels of meaning for Sir Gawain. Be prepared to discuss on Wed and/or Thurs).
Hmwk: Finish final draft of Sir Gawain essay. Print out hard copy and assemble in a folder (with all previous drafts) to submit at the beginning of class tomorrow.
WedDue: Final draft of Sir Gawain essays. Read essays aloud in class. Continue discussions about meaning started on Tuesday (Journal writing #3).
Hmwk: Submit essay to Turnitin.com before midnight today. Study for Sir Gawain test.
ThursTest review and discussion. Continue discussions about meaning started on Tuesday (Journal writing #3).
Hmwk: Study for Sir Gawain test.
Fri A Test: Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. No hmwk.
Week of October 5 to 9
Mon

Begin A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. Intro study approach. Intro Lambs' Tales from Shakespeare. Project Gutenberg: A Midsummer Night's Dream. Work on classical allusions. Write notes as Journal Writing #4 (Explain the allusion so that you understand the passage better.)
Hmwk: Read
Lambs' Tales from Shakespeare, "A Midsummer Night's Dream.

TuesA Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. Reading quiz. Continue with classical allusions (Put your explanation of the allusion assigned to you in Journal Writing #4).
Hmwk: Read "Enjoying 'A Midsummer Night's Dream', by William Shakespeare" (by Ed Friedlander) as a lighthearted introduction to the play. (Read down to "Productions." There are some lovely images below this section, but Friedlander's introduction to AMND finishes with "Productions." The rest is unrelated, other stuff.) Do you agree with the author? What do you want to know more about--now that you've read this intro?
WedA Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. Share research on classical allusions. Choose parts in Act I, Scene 1 and 2. Prepare to read your parts.
Hmwk: Prepare to read your parts in Act I, Scenes 1 and 2. Pay close attention to phrasing, expression, word meaning, pronunciation, and clarity. Practice reading so that you HELP your classmates understand the lines. (Imagine you are a professional actor/actress preparing for this role. What do you need to know to be able to read the lines well?)
ThursA Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. Re-do classical allusion presentations by students not prepared yesterday (half credit if no excused absence involved in lack of preparation). Read aloud: Act I. Return and go over Sir Gawain tests. No hmwk.
Fri B No class.
Week of October 12 to 16
MonBegin viewing A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare.
Hmwk: Read A Note on Shakespeare's Grammar. Take the short quiz. (Use this URL: http://homepages.wmich.edu/~cooneys/tchg/quiz/shak/quiz.html rather than the link at the bottom of the handout.) Try your hand at "Will's Words," a "Masterpiece word game about Shakespeare and his way with words". (The explanations are interesting--even if you don't always get the answers right.)
TuesContinue viewing A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare.
Hmwk: Read "The Language of Shakespeare" and spend about half an hour following some of the interesting links at the bottom of the page. Browse to learn more.
Wed

Continue viewing A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare.
Hmwk: Read the "Language" section in the Folger website about "Teaching A Midsummer Night's Dream." Select two different passages in AMND (one involving Helena, Hermia, and co., and the other involving Nick Bottom and his working friends). Look for several examples in each section of

  • "unfamiliar words or words whose meanings have changed" AND
  • "unfamiliar word order."

Be prepared to share and explain what you have discovered in class tomorrow.

ThursReturn essays and discuss re-write option. (Conference required for all students choosing the re-write option.) Share on classroom board what you discovered last night. AMND essay options.
Hmwk: Work on Sir Gawain essay re-write. Due Monday.
Fri A A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. AMND essay options. (Re-write conferences, as necessary)
[WOPAM this weekend]
Week of October 19 to 23 (End of first quarter)
Mon

Due: Sir Gawain essay re-write. A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. Students divide into pairs. Randomly assign AMND essay option. Activity:

  1. Identify the problem/question your group has been assigned.
  2. Come up with 3-5 solutions/explanations and/or discussion points.
  3. Design and create a visual that serves as a discussion prompt about your question.

Hmwk: Do individually assigned research for your group's discussion board.

Tues

A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. Distribute poster board. Continue working on AMND essay option group activity (see above). Consolidate homework findings and work on discussion board.
Hmwk: Choose which essay you want to write. Work on the Thinking stage of the writing process. Bring notes, free writing, lists, etc., to give evidence of the thinking. Submit Sir Gawain RE-WRITE to Turnitin.com before midnight tomorrow night.

WedDue: evidence of the Thinking stage of the writing process. A Midsummer Night's Dream, Shakespeare. Finish up discussion boards.
Hmwk: Submit Sir Gawain RE-WRITE to Turnitin.com before midnight tonight. Organize your essay. What is your thesis? What will you have in EACH paragraph? Write out a detailed sentence outline OR create a detailed cluster sheet. [Link to cluster sheet file]
ThursAMND essays: Check off organization stage of the writing process. (Half of class members gone for a volleyball game in SF. Discussion postponed.) Those remaining: continue working on essay. No hmwk.
Fri B No class.

Syllabus | Assignments