English 12
Rosemary Dibben
(707) 965-6759, PrepEnglish@yahoo.com
English Department
PUC Preparatory School
McKibbin Hall, 1 Angwin Ave.
Angwin, CA 94508

Syllabus | First Quarter's AssignmentsRevised: Sept. 1, 2010
Week of August 16 to 20 (Beginning of first quarter and first semester)
Mon

First day of class: Class introductions. English I2 as part of the Prep English sequence and as a reflection of the NAD Curriculum Guide (reading, writing, speaking, listening, viewing). Distribute copies of course syllabus. Review of journaling as part of the writing process. Assembling English notebooks. Journal Writing #1 (Be prepared to share #1 & 2 with classmates.):

  1. What was the BEST part of your summer?
  2. Brag on yourself about something you've done in the last 12 months of which you are very proud.
  3. What I need to accomplish this school year . . .
  4. This year will be the same . . .
  5. This year will be different . . .

Hmwk: Finish reading course syllabus. Send to Mrs. Dibben (PrepEnglish@yahoo.com) a photo of yourself doing something fun this summer. Due by Wednesday.

TuesReading survey (on board). Journal Writing #2 (Complete: "Upon reflection on my years at Prep, I have learned that ____________ helps me to be most successful.") Discuss success strategies. Begin college writing unit. Intro concept of figuring out how you, personally, best accomplish each stage of the writing process most efficiently and effectively.
Hmwk: Read "How to Get an "A" on an Academic Essay." Be ready for a reading quiz tomorrow. Finish assembling English binder. Send to Mrs. Dibben (PrepEnglish@yahoo.com) a photo of yourself doing something fun this summer--if you haven't done so already.
Wed

College writing. Reading quiz over "How to Get an "A" on an Academic Essay." Discuss the writing process and our attitudes towards it. No hmwk.
Leave notebooks in classroom for initial check.
(For full credit, you need to have a notebook, five tabs--correctly labelled and in right order, a syllabus in "Handouts" section, Writing #1 in the "Journal" section, and your name on the front cover and/or spine.)

ThursNo Class: Whole-School Fine Arts Field Trip to SF.
Week of August 23 to 27
Mon[Week of Prayer] College writing. Journal writing #3 (Untimed: favorite childhood place). Example essay assignment sheet. Pre-writing/thinking.
Hmwk: Thinking! Think, think, think! You want to generate LOTS of ideas.
Tues[Week of Prayer] College writing. Create LOTS of evidence of the thinking stage. (Add to Journal Writing #3, started in class yesterday.) Go for volume! Discuss organizing methods. Intro cluster sheets. Share sample example essay. Define and discuss examples of "multiple examples" and "extended examples." Examine sample cluster sheet and sample sentence outline. Distribute blank cluster sheets.
Hmwk: Work on cluster sheet for your essay.
Wed

No Class: Whole-School Field Trip to Ball Game

Thurs

[Week of Prayer] Discuss features of sentence outlines. Complete cluster sheet for your essay. Check off cluster sheets. Begin sentence outline for your essay. Word process your sentence outline, and print out a copy to bring to class on Mon.
Hmwk: Complete sentence outline (if not finished in class). Bring hard copy of word-processed sentence outline to class on Monday, to be checked off.

Week of August 30 to September 3
Mon

Due: Completed, word-processed sentence outline. College writing. Check off hard copies of sentence outlines. Discuss drafting methods. Begin drafting.
Hmwk: Finish creating at least three paragraphs of your rough draft for check-off on Tuesday.

Tues

Due: At least three paragraphs of a rough-rough draft. College writing. Continue drafting. Goal: A complete rough-rough draft by the beginning of class Wednesday. (Football players will want to try to complete rough draft during class time!)
Hmwk: Complete rough-rough draft. Print out hard copy (double spaced, Times New Roman, 12 pt, name in upper-left corner).

Wed

Due: Hard copy of complete, word-processed rough-rough draft. Read Anne Lamott on "Crummy First Drafts." Self evaluation.
Hmwk: Re-draft essay making revisions suggested by your self-evaluation. Print out new hard draft of revised essa. Bring to class on Thursday.

Thurs

Due: New hard copy of rough draft (incorporating changes evident from self-evaluation process). College writing. Peer evaluation. Begin re-drafting essay making revisions that you agree with from the peer evaluation process.

Week of September 6 to 10
MonNo Class: Labor Day
Tues

Complete re-drafting essay, incorporating peer evaluation changes.

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Due: Rough draft (incorporating useful peer evaluation suggestions). College writing. Analyze sample essay ("A Boy's View of Playland"), paying special attention to the thesis statement and connections between it and the topic sentences. Peer evaluation (with someone different than yesterday's reviewer). Discuss academic essay format. Use sample essay as model.
Hmwk: Re-draft essay incorporating any useful changes suggested by today's peer evaluation. Also, make sure your essay is now in correct academic format (2X spaced, 12 pt. Times New Roman, 1" margins on all sides, and paper heading in upper-right corner). Check out the sample essay if you have questions about academic essay format.

WedDue: Rough draft (incorporating useful suggestions from 2nd peer evaluation and correct academic essay format). College writing. Proofreading activity. Sign up for and prepare for essay conferences. No hmwk.
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Week of October 4 to 8
MonCollege writing. Finish proofreading. Discuss final draft format. Review sample essay for details. Begin essay conferences.
Hmwk: Print out two copies of the conference draft.
Tues

Essay conferences. (Bring two hard copies to your conference.) Students not in conference should meet in Mrs. Denton's room during class.

WedEssay conferences. Students not in conference should meet in Mrs. Denton's room during class.
Hmwk: Finish final draft and assemble all drafts into pocket folder in reverse chronological order. (This means the best draft on top, and the earliest draft at the back.)
ThursDue: Final draft of example essay (along with all other drafts and evaluations). College writing. Turnitin.com. Create profiles (if necessary), and submit essays to Turnitin.com.
Hmwk: Submit essay to Turnitin.com BEFORE midnight tonight.
Week of October 11 to 15 (End of first quarter)
Mon"Babette's Feast," Dinesen. Research Isak Dinesen (Karen Blixen) and give evidence of your research with at least one page of notes, in your own handwriting, in your own words, with sources.
Hmwk: Complete research. Be ready to share what you discovered in class tomorrow.
Tues"Babette's Feast," Dinesen. Share research. Begin reading "Babette's Feast." Explain Writing Self Assessment homework.
Hmwk: Journal Writing #4 & 5 (Writing Self Assessment)
Wed

Continue reading "Babette's Feast," Dinesen
Hmwk: Research Babette's background. Re-read Achille Papin's letter on pp. 29-30. Why is the year 1871 significant in Paris? What was going on? What was Babette escaping? Communards? Petroleuse? General Galliffet? What part in the civil disturbance does it seem that Babette may have played? Document your research with at least a page of notes--in your own words, in your own handwriting. Include source/s. Due tomorrow at the beginning of class. (Suggested resources: notes for a talk on "The Paris Commune," the Wikipedia entries on the Paris Commune, General Galliffet, and Petroleuses, and publisher's note for Unruly Women of Paris: Images of the Commune.)

ThursShare research. Finish reading "Babette's Feast," Dinesen. Distribute Study and discussion questions. No hmwk.

Syllabus | Assignments